Passive-aggressive disclaimer about appropriateness

[pauamma]

Reposting of content of bad prose collection, without attribution, implying that it was written by poster. Request for concrit.

Comments

[onyxlynx]

Missing attribution applied later in original. Examples scanned and compared to extra-auctorial database. Match hinted with Lionel Fanthorpe. Adjectivized surname. Typed. Posted.

[pauamma]

Repetitiopn of request for concrit. No acknowledgement of reply or thanks.

[onyxlynx]

Recommendation that Ms. Ros cultivate terseness. Distress at being unable to scan samples without wincing with horror and rejecting the computer. Uncontrollable desire to prune out every second and third word. Desperate hope that there might be a few drams of nepenthe somewhere in the apartment. Sentence diagramming. Extravagant use of blue pencil.

IOW, brevity and succinctness should be watchwords. If not commandments.